- Which story is easier to understand?
- Which story contains extraneous pieces of "cop speak"?
- Which story tells you a story?
- Which story is a jumble of facts, thrown together in a convoluted manner?
- Which story uses complicated words, when simpler ones will do?
- Which story is cut and pasted from a police press release?
- Which story was written by a reporter who personally gathered the facts?
- Which story was assembled by a glorified stenographer?
The choice is yours...
