Which Story?

• Which story is easier to understand?
• Which story contains extraneous pieces of "cop speak"?
• Which story tells you a story? 
• Which story is a jumble of facts, thrown together in a convoluted manner?
• Which story uses complicated words, when simpler ones will do?
• Which story is cut and pasted from a police press release?
• Which story was written by a reporter who personally gathered the facts?
• Which story was assembled by a glorified stenographer?

The choice is yours...